Friday, September 14, 2007

Unrequited

Clouds line a deep blue sky
The wind drowns a supressed sigh
The heart bleeds with a drunken care
The world around seems so unfair
Unpleasantness surrounds me now
A fool, infatuated- I don't know how
"Stability sucks" screams a bitter inside
But these scary feelings, I sure must hide
An ego drips from a conditioned soul
Don't look at me as if I'm foul
Turn the pages of destiny
And somewhere halfway you shall find me
Conscience plays a dual game
Poof!There goes the hall of fame
The innocence of that angel face
Lets the hatred in your heart showcase
The only one I've ever known...
The sheet of pride off me has blown
I pick the pieces to carry on
The girl inside me just breaks down
I move along on the beate track
And rush like hell, to get my love back...

5 comments:

Abdelazeez said...
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Abdelazeez said...

You've got a very good sense of tempo CGM, the kind that's become a sort of rarity these days.

You know, I think almost everyone can find a good word to attach to the end of a statement and then find a rhyming word for the next one (that formula does work out well in *some* cases), but then whats equally important is to have a 'sense of the beat' as I like to call it.

Very well composed this one was... Enjoyed reading it!

~AZ

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

once again, pretty dark... had no clue your persona had such a side too...
but then again, love your blog...

Abdelazeez said...

And for some reason I really love these lines:--


I pick the pieces to carry on
The girl inside me just breaks down
I move along on the beate track
And rush like hell, to get my love back...


Simply marvellous! Hope to see more stuff out here soon miss [:)]

Angie said...

really nice!